Cafe Neon Light
4 June 2010
Cafe Neon Light
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 Flashing Illuminated Erasable Neon LED Message Writing Board Menu Sign 16x12 $44.95 Time Remaining: 9d 17h 32m Buy It Now for only: $44.95 |
 led017 r Ice Cream Cafe LED Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 3h 17m |
 i863 b Internet OPEN Cafe Shop Bar Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 3h 28m |
 led121 r Bakery OPEN Shop Cafe Led Neon Sign WhiteBoard $29.99 Time Remaining: 27d 3h 35m Buy It Now for only: $29.99 |
 led018 r Internet Cafe Bar LED Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 4h 14m |
 led118 r Cappuccino Coffee Cup Cafe Led Neon Sign $29.99 Time Remaining: 27d 3h 35m Buy It Now for only: $29.99 |
 j685 b Restroom Arrow Toilet Cafe Bar Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 5h 8m |
 m106 b Cupcake Cafe Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 6h 51m |
 i519 r Hot Dog Dogs Cafe Lounge Lure Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 5h 55m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 22x13 Coffee Shop Led Lighted Sign Window Animated Flash Motion Neon Cafe Open $49.95 Time Remaining: 14h 5m Buy It Now for only: $54.95 |
 i028 b OPEN We Deliver Services Cafe NR Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 5h 52m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 i519 r Hot Dog Dogs Cafe Lounge Lure Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 23h 32m |
 Big D55 lager beer cafe store BEER BAR NEON LIGHT SIGN great 1814 real neon $0.97 Time Remaining: 16h 58m |
 led019 b Wi Fi Internet Cafe Bar LED Neon Light Sign $29.99 Time Remaining: 27d 3h 29m Buy It Now for only: $29.99 |
 Big D42 coors freedom cafe store BEER BAR NEON LIGHT SIGN great 1814 real neon $0.97 Time Remaining: 17h 29m |
 BRIGHT NEW LED OPEN5 Neon SIGN bar cafe Shop Cafe Bar Pub ANIMATED 220V 250V O5 $21.98 Time Remaining: 15d 7h 34m Buy It Now for only: $21.98 |
 i001 b Were OPEN Shop cafe Bar Display Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 15h 55m |
 i019 b OPEN Shop cafe Bar Pub Business Neon Light Signs $9.99 Time Remaining: 16h 24m |
 j685 b Restroom Arrow Toilet Cafe Bar Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 8h 56m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 i038 b OPEN NEW Cafe Restaurant Bar NR Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 17h 45m |
 i097 b OPEN Shop Display Cafe Business Neon Light Signs $28.99 Time Remaining: 23d 2h 26m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 BIG Da89 cafe SA open Beer Bar Neon light sign store display 1814 Real Neon $0.99 Time Remaining: 16h 8m |
 BIG Da86 beck cafe beer open Bar Neon light sign store display 1814 Real Neon $0.99 Time Remaining: 16h 38m |
 j936 b French Roast Coffee Cup Cafe Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 9h 1m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 i113 b OPEN Ice cream Cafe Mini Bar NR Neon Light Signs $9.99 Time Remaining: 19h 18m |
 New Super Bright LED Neon Light Coffee Shop Cafe Cup 16 $22.99 Time Remaining: 13d 4h 16m Buy It Now for only: $22.99 |
 BIG Da85 miller cafe open Beer Bar Neon light sign store display 1814 Real Neon $0.99 Time Remaining: 17h |
 i097 b OPEN Shop Display Cafe Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 20h 30m |
 led018 r Internet Cafe Bar LED Business Neon Light Sign $29.99 Time Remaining: 27d 3h 29m Buy It Now for only: $29.99 |
 i311 b BREAKFAST ALL DAY OPEN Cafe Bar Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 20h 59m |
 j209 b Teriyaki Cafe Shop Food OPEN neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 8h 43m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 Big D61 pretty girl cafe store BEER BAR NEON LIGHT SIGN great 1814 real neon $0.97 Time Remaining: 16h 29m |
 i317 b Cappuccino Espresso Coffee Cafe Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 21h 45m |
 led135 b Coffee Donuts Cafe Led Neon Sign WhiteBoard $29.99 Time Remaining: 27d 3h 36m Buy It Now for only: $29.99 |
 i310 b OPEN Coffee Donuts Cafe Bar NR Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 22h 27m |
 INTERNET ACCESS WINDOW CLING SIGN CAFE DECAL NEON COLOR 36 WIDE X 15 HIGH $28.50 Time Remaining: 28d 20h 43m Buy It Now for only: $28.50 |
 i478 b OPEN Bar Pub Shop Cafe Club NEW Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 22h 49m |
 i496 b OPEN Pizza Display Cafe NEW NR Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 22h 52m |
 j667 b Hoagies Sandwich Cafe Food Neon Light Signs $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 8h 55m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 a013 b Corona Extra Beer Bar Pub Caf Neon Light Signs $9.99 Time Remaining: 15h 25m |
 LINEN TABLE CLOTH BANQUET 60X108 100 POLYESTER $20.80 Time Remaining: 19d 16h 58m Buy It Now for only: $20.80 |
 a061 r Coca Cola Classic Logo Cafe Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 16h 18m |
 22x13 Coffee Shop Led Lighted Sign Window Animated Flash Motion Neon Cafe Open $49.95 Time Remaining: 2d 16h 10m Buy It Now for only: $54.95 |
 i317 b Cappuccino Espresso Coffee Cafe Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 8h 19m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 PATRON neon SPECIAL EDITION LIGHT COOL AND UNIQUE $44.99 Time Remaining: 16h 19m |
 s027 b Come in Were Open Shop Cafe Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 9h 13m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 BIG Da89 cafe SA open Beer Bar Neon light sign store display 1814 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 1d 17h 41m |
 BIG Da86 beck cafe beer open Bar Neon light sign store display 1814 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 1d 18h 2m |
 i519 r Hot Dog Dogs Cafe Lounge Lure Neon Light Signs $20.99 Time Remaining: 3h 37m Buy It Now for only: $20.99 |
 BIG Da85 miller cafe open Beer Bar Neon light sign store display 1814 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 1d 18h 12m |
 led138 r Internet Service Cafe Led Neon Sign WhiteBoard $29.99 Time Remaining: 27d 3h 36m Buy It Now for only: $29.99 |
 X1 whale cafe shop beer open Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 1d 19h 52m |
 X green frog 2 cafe open beer Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 16h 58m |
 LINEN TABLE CLOTH 72 SQUARE 100 POLYESTER $13.74 Time Remaining: 19d 16h 42m Buy It Now for only: $13.74 |
 X lizard cafe beer open Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 18h 8m |
 m106 b Cupcake Cafe Neon Light Signs $28.99 Time Remaining: 23d 2h 36m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 X green gator cafe open beer Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 18h 18m |
 X green frog 1 cafe open beer Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 18h 28m |
 Cafe Logo Beer Bar Pub Store Light Sign Neon B408 NEW $28.99 Time Remaining: 6d 3h 19m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 led065 b Internet Cafe Shop Led Neon Sign WhiteBoard $9.99 Time Remaining: 4d 12h 25m |
 LINEN TABLE CLOTH 60 ROUND 100 POLYESTER $11.97 Time Remaining: 29d 17h Buy It Now for only: $11.97 |
 X green frog 2 cafe open beer Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 18h 38m |
 X green frog 3 cafe open beer Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 21h 14m |
 Flashing Illuminated Erasable Neon LED Message Writing Board Menu Sign 32x24 $199.50 Time Remaining: 4d 21h 30m Buy It Now for only: $199.50 |
 X route 66 cafe beer open Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 22h 24m |
 i097 g OPEN Shop Display Cafe Business Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 5h 40m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 X mud flap girl cafe beer open Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 22h 34m |
 X motocycle bike cafe beer open Bar Neon light sign store display 139 Real Neon $4.88 Time Remaining: 2d 23h 44m |
 LINEN TABLE CLOTH BANQUET 60X120 100 POLYESTER $22.57 Time Remaining: 8d 17h 29m Buy It Now for only: $22.57 |
 led019 b Wi Fi Internet Cafe Bar LED Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 4d 19h 24m |
 s228 b Coffee Cup Shop Cafe Display Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 9h 18m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 led010 b Coffee Cafe Shop LED Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 4d 22h 41m |
 led010 r Coffee Cafe Shop LED Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 4d 22h 15m |
 LINEN TABLE CLOTH BANQUET 72x108 100 POLYESTER $20.80 Time Remaining: 19d 16h 58m Buy It Now for only: $20.80 |
 led009 b Coffee Cup Cafe LED Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 4d 23h 12m |
 i453 b Salad and Soup Cafe Restaurant Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 5h 50m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 led009 r Coffee Cup Cafe LED Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 4d 23h 22m |
 22x13 Coffee Shop Led Lighted Sign Window Animated Flash Motion Neon Cafe Open $49.95 Time Remaining: 5d 16h 1m Buy It Now for only: $54.95 |
 led017 r Ice Cream Cafe LED Business Neon Light Sign $29.99 Time Remaining: 27d 3h 29m Buy It Now for only: $29.99 |
 j399 b Open Flower Display Shop Cafe Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 4h 46m |
 i571 b Free Wi Fi Internet Access Cafe Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 6h 36m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 j742 b OPEN Bar Beer Drink Cafe Shop Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 5h 47m |
 i004 b OPEN Hot Pizza cafe Restaurant Neon Light Signs $9.99 Time Remaining: 16h 13m |
 i075 r Espresso Coffee Shop Cafe Club Neon Light Sign $28.99 Time Remaining: 2d 6h 28m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 i011 b OPEN Cafe NR Restaurant Business Neon Light Sign $9.99 Time Remaining: 16h 27m |
What do you think of this poem?
The sign says "Live Jazz". A single cafe... hidden among the buildings and billboards illuminated with neon lights. The saxophone, trumpet, and bass violin,
create notes, that waft, through my soul.
I like the subject, but there isn't too much flow. it seems to jump around as you go through it. (When you have all the lines bunched up as if it was a paragraph, it's hard to follow.) Shorten some of the lines or rearrange and/or change the words a little so that it would have more of a consistent flow.
Hope this helped! Let me know if you want to know anything else. 
